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  • 寫日記的小訣竅

    時間:2014-02-28來源:小學生作文網點擊:作文字數:
    常見錯誤寫法:
    今天我放學回家以后,媽媽就叫我先寫功課然后我就先寫功課,我寫完以后剛好就是吃飯時間所以我就去吃飯,吃完以后我就跟弟弟玩撲克牌后來弟弟輸了我就去洗澡,然后媽媽問我們說:“你們要不要出去啊?”我們就說:”好啊。”然后媽媽就帶我們出去商店買東西,我們買完以后就立刻回家了,回到家媽媽叫我們去刷牙,然后時間就很晚了,后來媽媽跟我說:“你該睡覺了”,然后我就說:“好我馬上去睡覺”,然后媽媽又問我說:”有沒有整理書包啊?”我說:“有”然后我就去上床睡覺了,今天真是快樂的一天。

    一、這篇日記的重點在哪里?刪除無意義以及多余的字詞之后,是不是只剩下一些內容而已?但是,仔細看這些內容之后,會不會覺得它就只是記事本而已呢?日記雖然是記錄你今天發生的事情,但是像吃飯、睡覺、跟某某人玩……等等的這些有沒有很“特別”?還是說這些事情很“普通”?這些事情只有你會發生?還是大家 都會發生?沒錯!日記要的不是普通,而是那些事情有什么特別的地方。例如吃飯,如果只有寫出“時間到了,媽媽叫我們去吃飯,然后我們就去吃飯”,這樣屬于“普通”?還是“特別”?如果把吃飯這件事情寫成“傍晚的時候,廚房傳來陣陣的香味,啊!沒錯!一定是媽媽正在煮香噴噴、熱騰騰的晚餐。”這樣的寫法是不是很“特別”呢?這樣的寫法,還加入類疊修辭、嗅覺摹寫、以及感嘆修辭,是不是增加了可看性,讓大家都喜愛看呢?結論:日記如果要記錄事情的時候,請記得把事情“特別”的地方(描述)出來。
    二、日記并不是在寫電影的劇本,如:媽媽問我說:“有沒有整理書包啊?”我說:“有”,除非這樣的對話很特別,否則請減少“對話”出現的機率,很少人會想看你和別人說話的內容,而且那些內容還是很無趣的、很普通的內容。
    三、注意并多學習標點符號的使用方法,該斷的地方要用符號將句子斷掉,這樣如果要念,也才知道哪里可以呼吸并且讓整句的意思保持通順。
    四、把文章分段落也是非常重要的,講相同內容或相同大意的就要放同一段,不要一段里面擠滿滿,講的又是兩三種不同的內容,讓人看了丈二金剛摸不著頭緒。
    五、就像語文課本提到的,日記并不是只能記錄今天發生的事情,你也可以寫出“今天的心情”、“今天在哪或什么時間學到聽到一些新奇的事物”、“或者讀了哪本書,也可以把你的心得、心里的想法、你覺得這書什么地方怎樣了?它教了你或開導你什么,讓你茅塞頓開、恍然大悟?”任何東西,只要是今天發生的,絕對都可以當成日記來寫,只要你記住一點:請記得把它“特別”的地方描述出來。
    六、最后,用你所學過的修辭(例如:擬人、比喻……)、句型(例如:除了…還要…。只要…就…)、成語(垂涎三尺、津津有味……),將這些學過又好用的工具用在適合的地方,絕對會讓人看了大呼過癮。(就像你不會拿釘書機去剪指甲吧?成語用錯了可是會貽笑大方的!)
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